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[Closed] The First Joke (drawing)

Sir Jack
(@sir-jack)
NarniaWeb Regular

Hello, I made this drawing, and well, its not finished, and its not my best, but, it shows the First Joke. later, theres sopposed to be a elefant and a big cat in the background. and these animals should look like a piece of the great circle of animals arround Aslan.

well...
I'd just like to know, what you guys think of it...


Topic starter Posted : May 21, 2010 9:08 pm
Alice_WL
(@alice_wl)
NarniaWeb Regular

Very nice pic.. You're a great artist.. ^^

"Who knows what I could bring, flying high upon a wing.
I believe that anything can be a princess thing."
- Princess Sofia the First

Posted : May 21, 2010 10:54 pm
Mehinen
(@mehinen)
NarniaWeb Nut

Great work! I really like the animals in the background! :D I think that the horse's eye might be very slightly too small, but otherwise the drawing is very nice. :)

My art blog (both in Finnish and in English) http://mehinen.wordpress.com/

Posted : May 21, 2010 11:02 pm
Meltintalle
(@mel)
Member Moderator

*looks for the elephant and big cat, before realising that they're not supposed to be there yet* ;))

I love the stork, jackdaw (raven? I'm afraid I don't remember which it was supposed to be ) and the mole, they're very cute. I like the styling you used for the horse, but I think the shoulder isn't deep enough. It's a great start, though, and I'm quite looking forward to seeing anything else you might do. :)

We have hands that fashion and heads that know,
But our hearts we lost - how long ago! -- G. K. Chesterton

Posted : May 22, 2010 5:33 am
DaughterofEve1792
(@daughterofeve1792)
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Oh, nice! I loved that part in the book! You've started to portray it very well! I can't wait to see the rest of it! :D And, I love Your signature. ;)

Posted : May 22, 2010 6:43 am
Sir Jack
(@sir-jack)
NarniaWeb Regular

Oh thank you all!

@ alice_jadis: Thanks!

@ Mehinen: I actually made the eye smaller, to make it look more like a talking beast, and more inteligent, because I thought the big horsey eyes look very animal-like. but maybe I'll make them bigger again. Thanks for your advice!

@ Meltintalle : It's a Jackdaw [by the way: my real name (Kaja) is the Norwegian word for Jackdaw :D]

&@DaughterofEve1792: I love this sceen to and was asounded, that I didn't find one drawing of that sceen in the internet.

Topic starter Posted : May 22, 2010 8:26 am
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