That is a very nice take on both Susan and Lucy. I think you drew Susan very good, it looks exactly like her and the details on her clothes are very good too!

There's something about Lucy and I think it's because she looks older then Susan in the picture but it is still very good and your perception 100 percent fantastic. I love it!

I can't wait to see the rest of your work!

Jill, you're going to make me a very conceited person if you keep giving me these WONDERFUL comments!!! THANK YOU! I can't say thanks enough, really. And, yes, I have realized that Lucy's eyes are too....angular? Sharp? Too pointy? lol Anywayz, they need to be smoother over the top and on the bottom. Thank you again!!

I love the amount of detail that you put into this piece of work, DaughterofEve1792! It is simply amazing! I especially rather like Susan's armour and outfit. I do agree with DamselJillPole that Susan looks somewhat young compared to Lucy, which in effect lessens the age difference between the two. Perhaps if you had of made Susan a little bit taller? My other bit of CC is that Lucy's arm- the one around Susan- looks to be somewhat too small for the rest of her. Other than that, however, excellent drawing!

Thanks ForeverFan! I'm glad you liked it.
I see what you mean about Lucy' arm, though, it is a bit scrawny.

Oh, goodness, I can't believe I didn't notice this before! Oh, this is absolutely beautiful! I don't know where to start! First off, Susan is absolutely amazing!!! I just love the way you drew her, the resemblance is beyond perfect, and her eyes are just stunning, as if cut out from a photo! The armor details are worthy a big praise and a bag of sweets as a reward for the diligence, and the background is very subtle, complementing the entire composition excellently. Lucy is a little bit off, but I don't care, the job is amazing anyway! Great work!

I get a bag of candy?! WOOT!!
Thank you, Beginte, thank you very much! I'll share my candy with you.

I'm quite impressed with your artwork. Your drawing of Susan and Lucy was very good.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Windsong

Thank you Windsong! I try to pull off the closest resemblence to the actual character as I can.

wow that is a really good drawing!! it really looks like them and that armor...amazing!!! i am totally amazed at the perfection!!!!!!