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[Closed] Lucy & Aslan WP

flambeau
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So, since I haven't posted a new wallpaper in a while, I figured it was time. ;)

I was trying out a new style of wallpaper, and so I would love feedback on it. :) The lyrics are from a gorgeous song by Redcast (which unfortunately you cannot purchase anywhere!), and I thought they were very fitting with Lucy's emotions in this scene.

Comments and constructive criticism appreciated. :)

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Topic starter Posted : May 22, 2010 10:36 am
sweeetlilgurlie
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A very lovely scheme of images, coloring, and textures. I like the setup as well.

One thing that I'd suggest changing is the font of the first two lines of text ('this is a dream? well, please don't wake me'). It does not quite fit the style of the wallpaper, and clashes a little bit with the last line of text. The last line of text, however, looks beautiful, and the lyrics do fit very well.

"Let the music cast its spell,
give the atmosphere a chance.
Simply follow where I lead;
let me teach you how to dance."

Posted : May 22, 2010 11:08 am
ForeverFan
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Very nice job on the colouring, flambeau! I particularly like the vividness of the colouring, without it being too orange and overpowering. I like the images you chose for the sequence with Lucy and Aslan, they fit the text quite well. :) Or perhaps it's the text fitting the images/overall theme. ;)) I would have to agree with sweeet in the fact about the first two lines of text and the font you chose...it just doesn't seem to flow as nicely as it could.

Over all though, nicely done! :)

Dear days of old, with the faces in the firelight,
Kind folks of old, you come again no more.
(Robert Louis Stevenson)

Posted : May 22, 2010 1:24 pm
MountainFireflower
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This is beautiful! I love the lyrics you chose and the pictures are stunning. I love this! :D

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Posted : May 28, 2010 8:46 am
Lion's Emblem
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Another great wp to your credit flambeau. Overall design and layout look good, nice and simple. Personally, I'm not one for all the negative space, but that just my personal preference (it makes the world of difference when the desktop icons are included, so that probably helps in the long run). Your choices of imagery are perfect for the concept of the piece. Your choice of text also works very well for the concept of the piece (font choices and layout look good here as well). Coloration throughout is fantastic, both for the imagery (I really like the intensity levels here) and for the text. Nice work .


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Posted : May 28, 2010 5:26 pm
malkah
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Beautiful WP, flambeau! I really like the simplicity and the contrast of the colored images with the black background. The highlight of the wallpaper for me definitely has to be the coloring! It's absolutely gorgeous! :D And about the fonts, I actually think the first line looks fine, but the second (Well, please don't wake me) is a bit harsh and distracting. The text itself is lovely. Overall, excellent work! :)

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Posted : May 31, 2010 2:17 pm
DamselJillPole
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That is beautiful flambeau! I love the black background, it looks like stone tile or something and i love your quote along with the font and the pictures with the WP. It's very well done ;)


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Posted : June 2, 2010 8:31 pm
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