Hey Liberty,

I like the exchange between Aslan and Digory in this poem. I also liked the way Digory describes Aslan in the end.

Another fine effort!
Windsong

This is based on VotDT movie when the adventurers land on The Lone Island and are captured by the slave traders. The last part is when Edmund and Caspian find Lord Bern on the dungeon. I hope to make sequel poems to go with this one!
enjoy!

"Captured!" (part 1)

Mystery looms, all around
Except our voices, there is no sound
CLANG! CLANG! The bells ring
And the silence after leaves us wondering

We enter through the crumbled gate
For the morning we dare not wait
Inside the tower is a book
With names of people slavers took

Again the bells ring in our ears
And there is no time for tears
Slavers take us all away
And now in a prison we lay
But in the dark a sad voice speaks
He's one of the seven we seek

Hey Liberty,

I liked the imagery that came out of this poem. It has a dark and foreboding feeling to it.

Good job,
Windsong

this is part 2 of the "Captured" poems based on the Narrowhaven sequence in VotDT movie. this is the part when Eustace and Lucy are chained to the wharf and they see the Green Mist eat the boat with the people in it.
enjoy!

"Captured!" (part 2)

We are chained at the dock
For the passerby to mock
We see people pulled away
So much sadness in this day

As the slavers release the boat
And watch it sail as if to gloat
A Green Mist rises from the sea
And the people cannot flee

The Mist swallows them, boat and all
They don't even have time to call
Are we to share in the same fate?
As we're dragged away, it seems too late

Hey Liberty,

Very good continuation of your VoDT story. I look forward to reading the next installment very soon.

Windsong

this is part 3 of the "Captured!" sequence.
enjoy!

"Captured!" (part 3)

In shame we're led before the crowd
They bid and haggle their prices loud
But Drinian and his men attack
To our aid they run into the pack

A fight ensues to make us free
And soon we have the victory
Lord Bern gives us a magic sword
And then once more we climb aboard

With Narrowhaven left behind
With Aslan's help more land we'll find
Onward we sail to seek the lords
And the rest of the seven swords

A good overview of Drinian and the crew liberating Caspian, Edmund and Lucy. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Windsong

this is right after Aslan created Narnia and the Talking Animals and the Jackdaw makes a joke!
enjoy!

"The Jackdaw"

Feeling embarrassed by what He'd just said
In His wing the Jackdaw buried His head

But by Aslan's words, laughter in Him awoke
For He had just been the first joke

Hey Liberty,

That was a short and enjoyable little musing you posted today.
I liked it.

Windsong

this is the first part of the "Duffers" series based on the Magician's Island part of VotDT movie.
enjoy!

"Duffers" (part 1)

Quietly approaching, looking for a girl
THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP
"This one is female,
But this one reads a tale."

Snatch her up, drag her away
Quickly, before it becomes day
She tries to fight, but she can't flee
And ourselves she cannot see

Hey Liberty,

Nice start to your Duffers poem. I look forward to its continuation.

Windsong

here is the continuation of the "Duffers" series based on VotDT movie on the Magician's Island.
enjoy!

"Duffers" (part 2)

In a shock, I wake to find
Invisible ones, my hands they bind
They tell me I can't run away
Or I won't live to see the day

A Voice speaks in the morning gloom
"Do our bidding or your friends are doomed.
Go read the spell, but beware the Oppressor!
He is very.....oppressive!"

Nice work Liberty. I look forward to the continuation of your poem.

Windsong

here is part 3 of the "Duffers" series based on the Magician's Island scene in the movie.
enjoy!

"Duffers" (part 3)

I wake to find marks in the sand
Footprints bigger than my hand
And worse still - Lucy is gone!
We search for her with our swords drawn

Though we think there's no one here
Voices speak and make us fear
They claim to be fierce and strong
But their secret's revealed before long

Hey Liberty,

I like the build-up in your poem about "the duffer's secret. I look forward to its continuation.

Windsong