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Liberty Hoffman
(@liberty-hoffman)
NarniaWeb Master

"Courage"

As the darkness closes in
And we think we'll never win
I cry out to the One who hears
And I feel hope shine through my fear

Through the mist I see a light
Breaking through the endless night
Then I feel a peace impart
When Aslan says, "Courage, dear heart."


NW sister - wild rose ~ NW big sis - ramagut
Born in the water
Take quick to the trees
I want all that You are

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EADBC57vKfQ

Topic starter Posted : June 8, 2011 11:38 am
wild rose
(@wild-rose)
Member Moderator Emeritus

such a sweet poem, I enjoyed it very much, you have such a talent Libby

always be humble and kind

Posted : June 10, 2011 6:08 am
Liberty Hoffman
(@liberty-hoffman)
NarniaWeb Master

this is a poem based on the part in LWW movie when Lucy and Susan ride on Aslan's back.
enjoy!

"A Morning Ride"

The trees surround us on all sides
The mountains are whipping past
Upon our upturned faces
The morning sun is cast

Aslan's feet pound on the ground
The wind flies through our hair
To our surprise we come upon
The Witch's icy lair


NW sister - wild rose ~ NW big sis - ramagut
Born in the water
Take quick to the trees
I want all that You are

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EADBC57vKfQ

Topic starter Posted : June 14, 2011 11:55 am
Miss Rosario
(@miss-rosario)
NarniaWeb Guru

I like "Courage", it was a very sweet poem. You portrayed Aslan nicely! :)

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NW little sister to Windsong
NW twin to Rosie

"I don't run away from a challenge because I am afraid. Instead, I run toward it because the only way to escape fear is to trample it beneath your feet." -Nadia Comaneci

Posted : June 17, 2011 10:52 am
Liberty Hoffman
(@liberty-hoffman)
NarniaWeb Master

"Forgiven"

I remember when I first saw His face
And the way that He imparted grace
To a lost and selfish wretch like me
When Aslan died He set me free


NW sister - wild rose ~ NW big sis - ramagut
Born in the water
Take quick to the trees
I want all that You are

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EADBC57vKfQ

Topic starter Posted : September 3, 2011 10:09 am
Windsong
(@windsong)
NarniaWeb Junkie

Hey Libby,

It's nice to see that you are continuing your poetry thread. Nice verse about Aslan and love. Good job.

Windsong

NW friends and siblings...AliceLuna, Liberty Hoffman, Lucy of Narnia, Lyneya,
Miss Rosario, MistressofDawn, Narnia Fanatic, Pogginfan, Silver the Wanderer, Smartypants, The Rose-Tree Dryad, TheValiantLucy, wild rose, Winterlife and Wolfloversk.

Posted : September 4, 2011 5:53 am
wild rose
(@wild-rose)
Member Moderator Emeritus

I liked it a lot, it was sweet and special, good work :)
"To a lost and selfish wretch like me"--I especially liked this line, I like the way the words go together :)

always be humble and kind

Posted : September 7, 2011 7:06 am
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