Here is a picture I drew of Jill(she is one of my favorite Queens of Narnia):
(as you can probably tell, I had keep erasing her mouth)
Comments would be appreciated
This was posted by Dancing Princess Cari
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Posted : September 18, 2009 1:29 pm
Wow, that is a really beautiful drawing!
or have you forgotten who really defeated the White Witch,Peter~Lucy
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Posted : September 19, 2009 5:35 am
I think you did a fine job on her mouth, and you did a fantastic job on her hair. If I would make any changes, it would be to make her nose a bit larger, as it's a bit too small for her face.
But well done! It's very good indeed!
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Posted : September 19, 2009 6:25 am
Yeah! You posted it! Good job figuring out how. Looks great. I guess the only suggestion I have is that (if the original had been large enough to permit this) I would have made her hair finer (fewer big thick strands, more individual hairs).
Very good, though. I like her expression. Very determined.
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Posted : September 19, 2009 12:09 pm
Thanks, guys, that's really encouraging!! I really like to draw.
My RL sibs are Adeona, Mars Aviator, Lizzle, NarnianCricket, and Andriel
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Posted : September 20, 2009 10:23 am
Very nice work 
. I like the shape of her mouth and how you placed the eyes: not too high or too low and partly hidden by her hair.
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Posted : October 3, 2009 8:03 am
I LIKE IT!
It is really the way I think jill would look like!
good Job! 
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Posted : October 5, 2009 4:32 pm
I just love original work..its so amazing! Absolutely wonderful job!!
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Posted : October 6, 2009 5:42 pm
Thank You! 
My RL sibs are Adeona, Mars Aviator, Lizzle, NarnianCricket, and Andriel
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Posted : October 9, 2009 7:59 pm
lovely job! you've placed the feautes all right where they should be, she looks great, maybe next time try and look at a reference picture for the chin, to make it end in a more gentle point, and I ditto the remark made about possibly having her hair in thinner strands 
but still well done
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Posted : December 26, 2009 9:46 pm
great picture I love they way you made her eyes
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Posted : December 28, 2009 7:06 am
Very nice!!! The picture is very meaningful, if you look at her eyes and I like that. Her hair is done very nicely, and I like the collar of her dress. Good job! You have a very nice start on concept art.
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Posted : January 2, 2010 8:06 am
Nice picture! the hair is good!
I guess the only suggestion I have is that (if the original had been large enough to permit this) I would have made her hair finer (fewer big thick strands, more individual hairs).
I'd say I would have to agree with this! But other then that, its great! 
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Posted : January 10, 2010 9:00 pm