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[Closed] Farewell to Narnia

Lucy P.
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http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_e4Gy_w75heA/S ... n33636.jpg

tell me what you think!


Quod Erat Demonstrandum

Topic starter Posted : November 7, 2009 3:01 am
LadyGrace
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I LOVE it! :D The text look's really good. Is the quote from a song? I like your idea of putting them in the train station, but in there Narnian clothes. It's really cool. Great job!


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Posted : November 7, 2009 3:24 am
NothinButNarnia
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WOW! I love the pictures and brushes you used and the text fits perfectly! Amazing job!


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Posted : November 7, 2009 4:31 am
narnialover101
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I really like this piece; very nice composition, excellent colors and I love the concept! Although I know it isn't really your fault, I can't help but notice the somewhat poor quality of the images used. The blending is a little bit rough in places, but not enough that it really bothers me. I love your font choice and placement, but I think perhaps a more cream-based color would have fitted in a bit better. Overall you've done a really great job!

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Posted : November 7, 2009 4:49 am
narnian1
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I loved this it!! :)

Posted : November 7, 2009 7:41 am
greenbird37
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I love the way you did the leaving from Narnia in their Narnian clothes back to the reality of the real world...blends in perfectly! Nice job!

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Posted : November 7, 2009 5:27 pm
Lion's Emblem
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Another great wp to your credit Lucy P., you never disappoint. The concept of the piece is superb and the images that you have chosen along with the text fit in perfectly. For the text, font choices work well, as does the two toned coloration. I read the text by color matchups instead of by grouped fonts which caused the ordering to be read a bit awkward. Perhaps it's just me, but I did find that the "power" behind the text didn't come off as strong as it could be compared to being read in the proper matchups (and maybe you did mean for it to be read differently, so perhaps it is just me). Coloration throughout is fantastic, really sets up the tone of the piece. Imagery is blended together well, and as others have stated, the match between the English tunnel and Peter and Susan in their Narnian clothes is great. I'm not sure on the sizing between the Peter and Susan images. Susan seems to be a bit smaller in proportion to Peter (the height looks alright, but the head sizes seem very different). However, I can also see this as being intentional, so as to fit the text into the layout with the imagery. Nice work .


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Posted : November 8, 2009 4:38 pm
Lucy P.
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Thanks guys! You always brighten my day. :)

Yeah, the blending could have been better- I should work on that.
As for the proportions, well, Susan and Peter were like that in the original picture. I guess it was just kind of a weird screencap.


Quod Erat Demonstrandum

Topic starter Posted : November 9, 2009 2:34 pm
lover of narnia
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The concept works very well!!! I like the vintage type old feel you used for the coloration and textures...the blend into the train station is very nice! I love the fonts you used and the text is very good! nice darker feel...VERY NICE JOB!

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Posted : November 12, 2009 5:46 am
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