I its wonderful mu only cc is that the background seems a bit grainy.
But the coloring is gorgeous, and I like how one picture fades along the side. I also like how you overlapped the text on the 1st one

I like the colouring, Djaq! The placement of the images and how you've arranged/cropped them is pretty good, although I do have a CC in that area. On the bottom, left hand corner image of Edmund, it looks a little visually distracting to have part of Peter in the image, but the rest cut off. Perhaps though, you couldn't have done much about it because of the way the image was, but I thought I'd put it out there.

I think my favourite of the two is the one without the text.

I like the one with the text best, especially how "Edmund" is behind the other words. I agree with ForeverFan that it is a little distracting with part of Peter in the image. Maybe you could fuzz it out like the bottom of the picture next to it. That would add some symmetry and get rid of the parts of Peter.