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[Closed] Change my Name- Susan wallpaper

lover of narnia
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I named the title after the lyrics from the song I used. This is my second attempt at a Susan wallpapers. The words are from a song: change my Name By Trading Yesterday. I would really like to here your comments and critisism. Here it is..

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Topic starter Posted : November 13, 2009 5:19 am
greenbird37
(@greenbird37)
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I love it..the words fit perfectly! Very nice job!!

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Posted : November 13, 2009 4:57 pm
Lion's Emblem
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Nice wp lover of narnia, simple, yet effective. Lighting and contrast levels look good, though, I'm not sure on how these elements are affecting the coloration. I like the intensity of the red in Susan's arrows (a nice matchup to the red "light spot" on the text, really brings out the color), but the coloration on Susan's face is just not working for me. Some wp designers really like that sort of contrasty coloration in their pieces, so I suppose it is subjective (just never suited me though). Having the font color be white is really effective against the black background. I like the fact that the text greys down as well when reading it. Font choices also work well. I can pull my own meanings behind the connection between text and imagery, but I am curious to know your own reasonings for connecting the two conceptually. Nice work .


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Posted : November 13, 2009 6:07 pm
narnia_lover127
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That is really great!! The picture and the text you chose fit each other really well. i love the coloring especially how her eys came out, really pretty font too.

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Posted : November 14, 2009 1:16 am
Beginte
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Oh, yay! Ths is great! The colors are a masterpiece, I love how each verse is more faded than the other, and the red light is great! All this has such an amazing power... great job! :D


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Posted : December 7, 2009 6:20 am
hyaline12
(@hyaline12)
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You listen to Trading Yesterday!? I love them, but next to nobody's heard of them. *is happy*

But, to stay on topic, I love it! I like the fading colours of the different verses and the font. The colouring is awesome too, it makes her eyes look really pretty. Great job!


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Posted : December 8, 2009 3:13 pm
MissAravis
(@missaravis)
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Wow, I love the colors. Her eyes look so amazing! I think, perhaps, you could have tried making the text a little bit smaller so that you wouldn't have to hyphenate words/have just one word on the last line.
Great job!!

Posted : December 10, 2009 7:49 am
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