I will eventually add more to these, but this is a picture of adult Peter and Edmund from my "Blades of Narnia" series of fanfics.
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Posted : May 26, 2011 3:38 pm
hey nice 
good shading!
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Posted : May 27, 2011 8:30 am
Good job!
The guy on the right reminds me of Faramir.
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Posted : May 27, 2011 10:53 pm
Very nice! I especially like Edmund on the left and his weapons.
Peter's face looks great as well. It's very kingly and I love how he looks like he's looking straight at me.
My only critique is that you positioned Peter in such a way that he looks like he has a very short torso.
Posted : May 29, 2011 6:01 pm
I really like them! You've got a nice style and they're well done.
Is it Peter on the left and Edmund on the right?
If so, my only critique is that Edmund looks like his torso is a little short and that his bottom doesn't look like he's actually sitting on that box. I think that it's because the bottom isn't fat enough. 
"Let the music cast its spell,
give the atmosphere a chance.
Simply follow where I lead;
let me teach you how to dance."
Posted : May 30, 2011 4:44 am
Great drawings caleon! 
I Love your shading, very soft and nice on the eyes!
Looking forward to seeing the rest!
The Value of myth is that it takes all the things you know and restores to them the rich significance which has been hidden by the veil of familiarity. C.S. Lewis
Posted : May 31, 2011 2:05 pm
Really like this, especially as you have captured their expressions perfectly and I love the shading.
There is something sincere and noble about them both although their proportions arent quite right. Please put some more up, especially of Lucy and Susan
"I'm on Aslan's side even if there isn't any Aslan to lead it. I'm going to live like a Narnian even if there isn't any Narnia."— C.S. Lewis (SC)
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Posted : June 1, 2011 10:00 am
very nice...sketch
you have a good hand in drawing
Posted : June 22, 2011 1:23 am
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