These are so lovely!!!! The wallpaper is great, though I think I might like the banner better! They're both very good though! I love the use of pictures and the lyrics. They really are awesome!

I like the second one the best, I think.

The main picture you used in both really fits the mood and lyrics.

Princess Anna, Again wonderful job! I like the second one best because it has more pictures

Love the second one the best...it shows all his different emotions, but both are very good!!

A nice pair of wps (or variations of a single wp I suppose) Princess Anna. I agree with everyone that the second version is the "better" (ugh, I dislike using that word, it doesn't have much substance) one. To me, the first version is just so overcrowded with text. It should be more about the imagery with the text being a secondary element (it's a visual medium afterall). The second version is much more asthetically pleasing.

The layout is great. The use of screenshots as a border (really nice work on "boxing" in the main image) is far more interesting to look at compared to blocks of text. I also really like how certain images flow into the main image (i.e. the two bottom images of Ed and the more subtle overlay of the horse in the top left). There's also nice imagery variety to showcase Edmund's "hero" moments. Your choice of text works well with the imagery and with the concept of the piece. I especially like the coloration on the text and how it mirrors that of the ice in the main image. Nice work .

I like the second version better. The first one seems really busy...I don't like having my eyes jumping all over the piece. I would cut down on the amount of lyrics...either that or have one set of lyrics be your "focus" while the others are more "background", if you get my drift. Maybe make them smaller or something to help them recede into the background a bit...

Thanks for all the lovely comments, you guys! I'm so glad you like them!
And especial thanks to LE and Fire Fairy... I'll keep those thoughts and suggestions in mind next time.

's for all!

~PA

Wow, great job P_A! The first version I found quite funny almost...how Edmund has just this casual sort of stance like, "I'm just an ordinary guy...but a superhero too" and then there's a bunch of great quotes everywhere and a picture of him doing something heroic.

The second one I like more perhaps because there's more things to look at ...it gives you a more simple definition of what Edmund is, but it also shows you a lot more of what he's done...and the choice of all the photos for that one were great, they all showed his deeds and heroics actions quite clearly.

Overall,

aww I love them both! I really like all the lyrics and I love your main picture of Edmund stabbing the ice! I cant piick a favorite, I love all the shots in the 2nd one but really enjoy the simpleness of the first one! excellent work!