awesome job, I really love it, I love the black and white pictures and peter's face, the only thing is that I can't read the words on the bottom very well, but other than that it is really amazing

Nice wp DaughterofEve1792. Overall layout is interesting, not quite what's expected. It works well, almost as though Peter is reflecting as he looks back at the images of his siblings. His expressions also works really well as a reflection to your choice of text. I would highly suggest re-working the layout of the text in relation to the imagery. A lot of faces are covered by the text (both Susan pics. in row four and nearly all of the last row). Just a few slight tweaks here and there would be really beneficial for you. In addition, I agree with wild rose, that some of the text is hard to read because it gets lost in the imagery. This is an easy fix. You can either play around with another color choice, but a change in opacity could also work (especially on the first section of text in white).

Other than that, you have a really nice collection of images. There's a nice visual variety and they all tie in together really well. I personally might exchange out the image of all four Pevensies in the boat though, just because Peter is in the image, so it doesn't feel like it matches with the text. On a design note, the addition of the border adds a great finishing touch as well. Nice work .

Wow, thanks guys!
Lion's Emblem: Thanks for such a great critique! It was very consturtive, and I found everything you pointed out. I get what you say about the boat picture, it DOES seem out of place, since he's reflecting only on his siblings. I'll give this type of set up another shot.

This is super lovely, I really love it - I love the style that you make them. Really well done!! I found it rather difficult to read the words, though . . .