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Miley was surprised when Peter opened the door, and turned from the doctor to her little cousin. "Alright Peter, as soon as we leave here I'll promise to get you something to eat." She thanked the doctor for everything and put an arm around Peter's shoulders. She snatched her purse from the table and opened the door into the waiting room. "Feeling any better? The doctor gave you a shot to help with the stress. He says your hair will grow back in time, and if the stress stops it should stop falling out, okay?" He just nodded and walked with her slowly.

Miley's Mom was waiting for them after the appointment. They all walked from the doctors to the car in silence. Miley, helped a sad, shaky Peter into the car and shut the door after him. Then once her Mother was in, she slipped into the drivers seat and started the car. 'Lord please help Peter to be strong again. Give him the strength to go on.' she thought as they drove away

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"I want, a protien shake, and a hamburger please." Miley said to the man across the counter from her. She had driven to 'Steak and Shake', her favorite resturant, to get her cousin a shake and a hamburger. She figured it not only was good protien, but he was starving....and so was she. But she stopped herself from buying any food for her, because her cousin needed it more. It was 5 minutes before the order was complete and she left with $7 less in her purse. When she got back out to the car, and slipped into the drivers seat, she handed back the food to Peter. "Here you are Peter......" she said, her voice gentle and kind.

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Brian hugged his Dad and his Mom as best as he could and thanked them over and over again before rushing down stairs to the phone. He couldn't find Peter number "Gosh darn it...I must have lost it." so he called Justin "Hey Justin? Could you give me Peters number, I really want to call him and I can't find it anywhere"

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Posted : February 7, 2010 5:02 am
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Justin gave Brian Peter's number, hoping this meant the two fo them coudl hang out again. He gave Brian Peter's home and cell phone number."
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Peter weakly thanked her, taking in the food. He didn't care about the fat or the calories. He just wanted his hair back and the rest of it to stay on his head. He could worry about calories some other time. He thanked God for his food and begged God to let his hair grow back and stop falling out. He decided to take Miley's advice for now and not worry about it so much.

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Posted : February 7, 2010 5:09 am
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"Thanks Justin" Brian said as he hung up, then dialed Peter's cellphone. He figured that he could probably get him there, better then at home. The phone ran and rang....and Brian wondered if he would ever pick up. He was excited to tell his friend they could see each other.

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Miley drove home after that, she wanted Peter to back where he could feel secure. She felt so bad for him and wished there was something else besides taking him to the doctor, she could do for him. She wondered if Justin's counseling would help, or just make him more upset. Justin was his favorite cousin.....she pushed a worried feeling down and convinced herself it would help.

Forgetting for a minute all the bad things going on, she focused on driving. It was only a couple blocks more to her house, and she wanted to make sure they got there safefully. When they pulled in the drive Miley heard a ringing behind her "Peter is that your cellphone?" she asked, gazing in the rear-view mirror at him.

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:18 am
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Peter finished his hamburger and dug through his pocket. "Yeah." He strained to hold the phone to his ear. "Hello?"
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Jusitn and Maralyn prayed for Peter, that his hair and his strength would come back. They also prayed his fever would go down. THen he called Miley's cell.

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:23 am
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"Hey Pete!!" Brian's happy voice exploded over the line. "I can still see you!! We can hang out together!" he said barely able to get it out he was so excited about it.

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AS Peter answered his phone miley got out and went to the front door to unlock it. Just as she was about to get her keys, her phone ran. She flipped it open "Yes?"

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:32 am
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Peter was thrilled to hear the news, but too sick to enjoy it. "Really? Good. Does she still think you getting shot was my fault?" he asked, as he weakly made his way in side.
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Justin asked, "Are you all home yet?"

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:36 am
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"I don't think so....Justin called her...and kinda yelled at her" Peter could tell Brian was kinda upset about Justin being mean to his mom. "Then she started crying.....I think she doesn't blame you anymore."

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"Yes...I was just about to call you Justin" Miley said as she sat in a chair in the kitchen.

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:46 am
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Justin said, "Good. I'm on my way." He kissed his wife goodbye, then drove over to Peter's house."
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Peter was grateful for his cousin standing up for him, but at the same time didn't want his friend upset. "I'm sorry. He didn't mean to upset her, I'm sure. Well, I have a fever, maybe we can hang out if I ever get better?"
He paused for a minute. "Wait, so you know what's happening to my hair then?"

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Posted : February 7, 2010 6:52 am
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Brian hesitated wondering what his friend would think of him when he told him he already knew. "Yeah...Justin told me yesterday, when you came over. But he didn't tell me you had a fever" there was deep concern in his voice. "I really hope you get better soon Peter. As soon asn your better and I'm bettter I promise I'll come visit you."

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when Justin arrived Miley let him in quietly while Peter fininshed up his call. "I'm glad you here" she said to him.

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Posted : February 7, 2010 7:35 am
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Peter swalllowed. "I hope I get better too. Really don't want to be bald." A tear escaped his eye. "I have to go." He hung up, then weakly walked turned to greet Justin. He caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror. There was a lock of hair touching the ends of the hair that was still attached to his head. He sadly took it and fingered it. "Why is this happening to me?" He wondered if Brian still really wanted to be his friend or just felt sorry for him.

Justin rushed to his cousin's side and put his arms around him. Why was all this happpening to Peter? He tucked Peter's curls behind his ear and rubbed his back. "What did the doctor say?"

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Posted : February 7, 2010 8:00 am
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"He said my hair would grow back.....eventually....." Peter's voice was choked with tears. He tried not to cry again, knowing he had cried enough already, but when he hugged Justin everything just wanted to come spilling out. His older cousin made him feel so secure, and tears began running down. He hid his face in Justin's shirt to prevent him from seeing them. "Everythings so horrrible....oh why can't all this stop....." Peter sobbed, as he felt another small lock of hair brush his neck as it fell. He felt like screaming for it to stop, but it would do no good. His heart trembled under all the stress, and Peter wonder if it would break. "Oh Justin..."

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Posted : February 8, 2010 8:23 am
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Justin could hear the emotion in his cousin's voice, as another lock of hair fell out. He held his cousin close, his own heart breaking for him. First, his hair gets shaved form surgery, then it gets pulled out, then cut off twice all in a year's time. He asked God if He could see how this was hurting his cousin. He shouldn't have to lose his hair at fourteen, so why? "Hey. Want to read the Bible? I have a verse for you." He really did not want to sound like Peter was not trusting God, because he knew better. Peter had better faith in God than most people.

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Posted : February 8, 2010 8:32 am
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"Sure..." came Peter's broken voice. "We can use me bible....in my room..." he began walking dejected up the stairs toward his room. On the way up he tripped and Justin caught him. "I don't know why this is all happening..." Peter said gripping the railing with white knuckles. He wasn't feeling very good, and he looked at Justin. "I don't feel good Justin.."

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Posted : February 8, 2010 9:02 am
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Justin held his little cousin close, leading him to the bathroom. He sat down with him and stroked his hair. He blinked, rubbing his cousin's back. "Remember 1 Peter 5:7?" He was really trying to comfort him, but wondered if Peter was up to remembering anything. He massaged his cousin's scalp, which Miley had told him stimulated hair growth once. It was when her hair was short she kept massaging her head and Justin had asked if her head hurt. She had told him that massaging stimulates hair growth.

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Posted : February 8, 2010 9:09 am
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Peter tried to remember but it hurt to think hard. "No..I don't remember right now..." he said touching one of his locks which fell into his hand. With a whimper he put it in Justin's hand and closed his fingers around it. "Why won't it stop falling out!?? I want my hair, I don't want to be bald!!" suddenly he broke into a coughing fit.

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Posted : February 8, 2010 9:32 am
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